My only critics are the lack of detail and length . Will could be the new Brandon Sanderson if he spent more time on the details. It can’t close my eyes and picture these amazing scenes and characters at all like I can With the greats like Harry Potter, lord of the rings, king killer chronicles, etc. for instance (spoiler of previous book) when he loses the parasite ring! And the lack of communication between characters. Why don’t they try to talk and get to know mercy at all? It bugs the heck out of me, at this point she’s just some random object on the side that talks sometimes. Will does such a good job giving characters potential to be someone we love or hate but I’m almost always left waiting for nothing to happen.