some of the other reviews have focused on character behavior plot, all of which are pretty weird and not particularly well written.
one thing I haven’t seen mentioned is how bad the descriptions are. oftentimes the author goes out of his way to make comments that badly describe things that are common sense. other times he just gives descriptions they don’t tell you anything. at one point he describes a character’s clothing as many school girl outfits. “each slightly different some fitting looser and some fitting tighter.” additionally a lot of descriptions only have anything to do with breasts or nipples. this book isn’t just badly written it’s written badly. I’m not sure exactly how many reviews there are of this but if there’s not many it’s probably because most people don’t have the patience to finish this to write a bad review.
the voice acting actually isn’t bad, buttons some spots it’s incredibly annoying. or as the narrator would say annoyin’.