So here’s the deal, great story, crappy MC. Now reread that last sentence and focus on the word CRAPPY, so it’s not “terrible”. Here’s the problem I got with him, you have someone who fancy’s themselves as a Light Yagami (Death Note MC). The problem is that this guy is more Bobbity (DragonBall Z). He makes a initial plan which sounds good, but only under the assumption that the target is a total noob, or idiot. He’s literally trying to play a “game of thrones” and it little better then high school drama. But what I find most annoying is that he know his biggest and most obvious weakness is his ability to defend himself, and even after getting numerous highly trained people around him he doesn’t try to improve himself. What’s worst is keeps getting emotional and charging into fights with a clear understanding that he himself is only a burden.
Now with all that out the way, major props to the narrator. He nailed even the female parts without sounding silly. The stories outline is great, but I just think we deserve a better MC then someone who lucks into survival 9 out of 10 times.