I would’ve given this book all five stars except for two aspects that were irritating. One of the 3 narrators reads in a very emotionless voice. Also, the word “said” is vastly overused in the dialogue. How about words like, “Replied”, “Asked“, “stated “? Even “screamed” would’ve been appropriate many times. There are so many creative ways to end a sentence of dialogue, but this author apparently knows none of them. Even all the interrogative sentences were ended with the word “said”. Annoying! Really good story , though.
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