Super rapey from the beginning, if that’s your thang. I rolled with it because the backstory was decent, there was potential. But I’m not satisfied with the “bedroom” scenes. Once the author started inferring that his “member” was going towards her womb (sounded like she was inferring it would “puncture” her), I tried hard not to laugh. Ya’ll did take an anatomy class, right? After that the sex scenes were ruined for me. But a semblance of a story is in here somewhere. The voice acting was good! Husky and dripping with lust in every sentence. Hungry peeps beware.
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