Strings of adjectives behind anything. Overuse of consonance. Overly detailed descriptions. Not a bad story line but the editor or writer wastes too much time being overly verbose.
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Strings of adjectives behind anything. Overuse of consonance. Overly detailed descriptions. Not a bad story line but the editor or writer wastes too much time being overly verbose.