Author sounds like a teen virgin writing sex scenes based on bad porn. Story would have been good if he wasn’t so busy objectifying the female characters and had spent some learning female anatomy. Maybe interacting with the opposite sex and such …write what you know, and so on. I got to the point where ge starts talking about the vagina lips (I think he meant labia) and huge eye. Some of these sentences should be inba reddit feed for men writing female characters. It’s a shame, because some of the underlying themes could make a good story without the horny teen locked in his room vibe.