First of all, great effort on world building for those who want to know.
If you’re into magic systems and depth of lore etc this is a great book for you.
My issue wasn’t with anything like this. It was simply the lack of character. Lyndon wasn’t a bad character, I just had trouble caring about him or anyone else.
There were some odd choices in beings from other worlds and realms that might make sense later but at this point it just felt convenient and out of place.
I’ve been looking forward to reading these for awhile. I was disappointed.