The story itself is good. Not particularly clever but it keeps you engaged enough. The vocal performance is awful. The narrator’s voice is too raspy and he doesn’t have clear enough diction. His tone doesn’t match what he is reading and comes off as trying too hard more often than not. It is very unnatural. The actual literary quality is absolutely pathetic. Did both authors really not tell the other that the writing is elementary and the dialogue feels as if an 8th grader wrote it? This is azy writing that seems like it was written in one sitting.