The MC is rash and too childish. The pacing feels off especially with the dialog. I’m not sure if that is on the writer or the narrator. The narrator has a way of making the MC feel way too excitable for my taste. Also, the combination of naiveté and hypocrisy that the MC regularly displays is really annoying. The measurement system used makes no sense as well…
Not a bad story, maybe reading will provide a better experience than listening?