I cringed early on here but pushed through hoping it would get better, especially with Jeff Hayes on board.
He is utterly overshadowed by 2 things: audio editing and the terrible dialogue.
AUDIO: Every time we jump from narrator to character talking/thinking the volume jumps. (Narration loud as hell, MC quiet AF) It’s maddening.
Dialogue: The MC has the most cringe nick names and dialogue with the female characters. It’s actually abhorrent.
Combine those factors with a weak baseline plot comparable with 7 other books from around the same time who did it better and…..
Overall a huge miss from me, dawg. Take a pass and drop your credit into the ocean before putting it here.