Good story. Definitely engaging and a different take on lit RPG that I enjoyed. I liked the idea of an anti mage so that was good. His motivation is meh. Could use some work on that and get rid of him crying about it.
The protagonist is bisexual and the comments can really throw you off if you aren’t ready for them. Nothing actually happens but there is a lot of attraction to muscular sweaty men in there so if you’re not into that then I wouldn’t read. The only other complaint I have would be the science. A moderate amount is all good but it did go too far at some points. Anyway. Nice narration. Love his voice. Nice and husky and smooth sounding. He talks a little slow so it can make the slow parts even slower. That’s all I got. After I catch up on some other series I may come back for #2. Though I may read the reviews first to make sure there isn’t any men on men love making.