This had so much potential as a story. The writer tried to combine a rebirth story, magic, school, adventuring but was unable to do it with anything resembling realistic behavior from any of the characters. There was no adequate explanation of the color magic system, cores, beast taming. Everything is a jumbled mess. I can’t believe I wasted a credit on this story. I bought it purely based on the narrator whom I liked in other stories.
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