than book 1 & that review is below this section. These books are about spiritual or inner GROWTH & in that context takes years to MILLENNIA, so this is more of a story & subtle, & their is no EPIC power growth. This book is better because:

#1 the WHOLE book is positive & the MC is rarely treated badly.

#2 setup story is over & is MUCH more interesting.

#3 mystical & combat parts are a SUBSTANTIOL part of this book.

#4 mystical explanations are MUCH more clear & in depth.

MC is POWERLESS: #1 nobles who are students & most elders treat him like BARELY useful dirt, use or lie to him.

#2 then step on him even more, when he shows ANY irritation or back bone,

#3 since he got less training & is a surf, he NEVER wins !!!

#4 even his sponsor or SOMWHAT nice teachers DO NOT or barely help him.

#5 this is NOT constant, so the book isn’t COMPLEATLY negative, but it brings the HOLE mood of the book down.

MC is a peasant farmer, with some combat training & he gets into a combat school, their is martial, melee & chi type skills: combat & these are just enough, to keep the book SOMEWHAT interesting.

Mystical powers or chi; their is no REAL level or progression ranking & this makes it VERY hard to tell how powerful the MC is or if he’s REALLY growing. Pre industrial middle eastern setting, where nobles rule & surfs are little better then slaves.

Pace is ok & not slow. Character interplay & story complexity, are barely interesting. Hard to keep track of who is who: ALL the names are TOO similar.

Performance is good: different voices & good inflections.