I’ve read most of the more criticizing reviews, and as an author myself, may be able to shed a little light on this book. In my opinion of course. I’ve written several different parts of a story at different times and have had to stretch certain parts so things make sense. But give credit where credit is due. The extensive detail to his training not to mention a bit more of a backstory for Silvia and more control over his Beast Will. It may be a tad bit choppy at times but in my humble opinion I think the effort put towards research for this book is worth the read!