I liked that this was an mpreg story with more than your typical amounts of action. I particularly liked the omega and his competence. Their moral ambiguity and violence was a change from other stories I’ve read, but certainly fit with the whole mobsyer theme. A few things with River’s acceptance of the mating seemed a bit out of character/too easy and the pacing once they solved the central conflict got a bit slow for an action/adventure plot. But I still enjoyed the story overall.