I did enjoy the story and found the narrative good. Two issues, the first being my own unfamiliarity with the names. I worked it out after listening for a bit. The second was the lack of narrator pause between each scene. I would be listening intently to one story line and then suddenly confused as to what was going on. Too often I had to jump back the 30 or 60 seconds to get back on track. Good author, good story, good narration, I just need a couple beats between story scenes and lines to smooth it out for my own brain. I would recommend with a heads up to the crowding.
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