Writing is not easy! And this book is proof of that. Although I love this story and listening to it, the writing skills are somewhat lacking.

I am not a writer, and this book is an example of just one of the many skills that I lack. I hope this will not be taken the wrong way, and viewed as a constructive comment.

In both books we have been left hanging at the end of the book rather than wanting. Why hanging I mean like at the end of this book we are left in the middle of a gun fight. This shows a lack of refined skills by the writer. I want to be left wanting more but not halfway through a story. I have bought all three of the books in this series and will continue to listen. I am not upset but disappointment.