so many lazy writing gimmicks.
1: all characters are absolutely moronic. they make extremely stupid mistakes like jumping into a hot spring in a dungeon thinking it’s going to be bath time. seriously.
2: killing random characters with some of the stupidest ways of dying does not make drama.
3: a lip RPG story that talks a lot about ranks but in the end the ranks mean nothing because the author makes the characters as stupid as he needs them to be in order to have them “losing” until he needs them to not be losing.
4: broken world. the balance of the overall interaction of the world elements would never work. the interaction of the humans and responses they have are utterly insane. it just all leads together to create an impression of not a fantasy world but a doomed world.