It’s good but you’re going backwards.

let me be clear. I absolutely love this series. it’s very unique and highly engaging!

that being said this book focused much more on Zach. which isn’t necessarily a bad thing and his story has become very interesting. That said I am still more interested in Ryuns storyline. even after all the events that happened to Zach.

To Ivan. you’re losing track of what people actually enjoy from the progression and having a character screen. and your making it take so long to get to what we are interested in that we as a listener are either just skipping forward, or needing to go back to relisten to content because our concentration has lapsed so many times.

having just the titles for someone ( many titles being repeats of something we have heard so many times) take 5 minutes alone. then having some of those titles such as ones from skills be repeated again as apart of the skills section has become too much. that and the enjoyment of having stats being allocated and available be non existent makes leveling up completely useless. people like the idea of real time progression. to idea of being able to make a decision and have your body change to match your choices real time. there was none of that in this book. and honestly since Zach is your leveling character. you have really turned a ton of people off of Zach all together by ignoring his stat allocation choices and changes as he levels.

Id recommend a way to make the read through of a full character sheet of someone we already know be much quicker. focus on what has changed. and start including the choices of their stat allocations again. or else this is just some non fiction book.