I see alot of negative reviews that start with complaing about the music or lack of rape , torture, visceral gore and constant cussing. Yes if your looking for something fouler this is not going to satisfy your nasty craving. I would say teens to early twenties guys would buy it up if it had more smut, but then i wouldnt like it, so meh. Choose your market.Character development and attachment was good. I thought it was funny, different. The skeletal fight club is something i would total do if i were in his situation. The music adds to the atmosphere but i can see where it might have been over repeated. I didnt knowtise it after awhile myself but added to the crazy atmosphere vib. I thought it was a good opening salvo into the book market, keep it up! Also where is book 2? =)