The story itself is not awful. Unfortunately, what good parts there are are over shadowed by poorly characterized protagonists who are almost bipolar in their actions toward one another. One moment, brothers in arms carrying their pride and sense of excellence, the next mewling little girls squabbling with each other. Also there is a cardboard cut our of a woman that exists in the plot, but she’s mostly there to semi justify the squabbling and deus ex machina herself into relevance.