Interesting story, but could be improved

The title says it all. This is a very interesting story, but there’s honestly a number of things that could be improved. Keep reading if you want to see my take of it.

First, describe characters. there were times when a character was named and they were either given a barebone description or none at all. The two named intelligence officers were one such example.

Second, give more description to the scene. There were times when listening that I felt I was just listening to characters talk before the next action occured, or a series of actions with no context to how the character viewed it.