This story is compelling. There are twists and turns galore. The language and alcohol refernces were too extreme for me. Perhaps it’s a southern thing, I don’t know. Do people really fling the F word into every conversation and plan their day around what they’ll drink? The story was exciting enough that I waded through it anyway. I will say that it was annoying to have so many readers. What’s up with that? It made the story seem more disjointed than it had to be. Then the ending came. The author had built up such confidence in me. The end had to be fantastic and exciting! But no, it was so weak, anticlamactic. Such a shame.
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