so, if he had decided to do more anticipation of sex and not graphical descriptions of sex, I think it would have still went over quite well. extremely disappointed at the description of how the supers were being created…
and at several points it was mentioned his picture within it and even that he would be pissed off after he finally found out, but the author decided to leave that part entirely out so we have to wait for another book just to find out??? extremely abrupt ending I’m thinking that the writer turned out a larger novel, and then decided to break it apart just to try to get us to get another one.
still on the fence as to whether I will even bother to get the next one, now that I know the writer is purposefully doing this, that is not a cliffhanger oh, it is nothing like a cliffhanger oh, it’s just poor writing.
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