I hate to offer reviews usually because writing is so hard and I couldn’t do it justice. I want to say nice try and way to go for even bad stories. So I will try to say what I mean in a respectful and kind way. (How could anything good come from a preface like this?)
Author notes:
The Universe created was very compelling. I’m usually turned off by magic but it works well in this setting and the author does a good job creating and describing the universe. I liked it.
Characters are interesting. I liked the character of Mort and really like Carl. Well done development and even though they do bad things I still liked them.
Storylines: Here’s where we kinda ran off the rails. The stories are sometimes very creative and compelling but too easily resolved. Too often the author glosses over a solution and does not go into any detail to describe how they got out of trouble. I would add that some of the storylines are a little dull. The last in particular, a band that sucks and plays a video game against all comers to earn food money. That’s how we wrap up the whole adventure? Way too shallow.
Narration: Great job, many voices well done and easy to listen to.
So, hope to see more in future from a more mature author. Big Fan.