I don’t care what’s at stake for Finn, he deserves a delete. It’s like a full 180 from his books. Hours of building up and being annoyed. Listening to Finns idiot child make threats every time she talks, in fact everyone in the book.
It feels like I’m just waiting for the story I want and not wanting the story I’m getting. Even Jason’s real life, none stop being pursued as if laws don’t exist. maybe in your book they just changed.