The protagonist makes lots of poor choices and doesn’t seem like a good person, or an interesting person. Only the NPCs are kind of interesting.

The content is thin and poorly paced. Too much time is spent on things that never become significant.

So far, I’ve only found 3 authors that do a passable job of writing in this genre. This one was almost tolerable, but the writing fell apart completely as soon as he left the first zone and never recovered.