However, however .. way too many unneeded words.

Overall, it could be an amazing story if it was edited.Too many re-tellings, too many extra words, too much saying the same thing with different words and throwing in a however.

.. I usually like the narrator, Andrea, but I think she could have done a better job with this one. Her emphasis in the sentences was on the wrong words for this type of writing, and it ended up making the main characters seem passive even though they just went around killing anyone that they deemed enemy.

Both MCs are stupidly overpowered and nieve, yet both pretend like there is nothing they can’t kill, then get shocked over and over when they almost die..

There are many great side characters and a great plot line. Has a bunch of major races such as dwarfs, elves, humans, gremlins, demons, angels, and some elemental creatures, as well as several different realms.

As I said, it could be a great story. Many stories have similar concepts, lol, but THE MOST DIFFICULT PART for me is the extreme amount of the word ‘however’, both in places it would be fine and places it should never be.. feels very unprofessional, and Andreas’ way of stressing the word just about has me bashing my head on a wall, begging her to stop reading the word.

I bought the 3 in 1 book and am almost done with the third, I’m going to finish it, but I will not be getting the next books. If I’m on book 3 and this problem is persisting, I doubt it will be fixed by the next book.

The author needs a new editor.