Jeff Hays is the only good thing here. The constraints the author put in could use a back story to make it more convincing.
The protagonist is so hollow. I couldn’t get very far in the story.
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Jeff Hays is the only good thing here. The constraints the author put in could use a back story to make it more convincing.
The protagonist is so hollow. I couldn’t get very far in the story.