There was to much thought conversation. I did not need to know every thought the lead characters had. I did not like that all the strong males in the group were killed. The fact the male lead was a Navy Seal but allow himself to lead around by that silly self centered woman, was just to much. They made so many mistakes that the leads should have died in the first book. They were in so many no win situations that there is no way any of them would have survived. I found it very difficult to care about the female lead, and the male lead came off as weak and somewhat incompetent.
I enjoyed the narration, but the story line was disjointed.