I have found the story interesting enough to keep listening, I’ve enjoyed the banter and characters. But there are a couple things I struggled with.
First, each time a character speaks, it is written, so and so said, then so and so said.
There are at least a dozen ways to say “said” without using the word “said”. Like, responded, replied, snarked, mused, etc. The said, said, said gets hard to listen to.
Second, for a main character that is touted for being smart and almost overloaded with wisdom, he doesn’t think much. Hopefully as the story continues it won’t be so obvious when his brain is turned off.
On the whole a good story and Travis is great as a narrator.
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