it doesn’t matter how good the story or characters are, this is a harem kink novel through and through so if thats your thing you will probably like it regardless of how good the writing is.
Jeff Hays does a superb job voice acting this book but it just isn’t meant for the audiobook format. A discussion is worth having on the subject of changing a book when turning it into an audiobook as Jeff Hays gets to spend an hour total reading character sheets and point lists. Which with a book you can just glance over those parts but with an audiobook you dont have that luxury.