I love the storyline I think the premise was outstanding the ending was a little weak for me but still good. My only complaint would be the narration. I felt the male narration was a little too dramatic. It kind of put me in mind of a story of detective from the 1930s reading over a movie That old gruff style speaking. So with that said honestly I would have loved to hear RC Bray bear read the story. But overall it was very good.