This is one where the story is very captivating, but you are pulled out of it way to often by really poor writing.
This book is clearly written by an amateur with no editor. Biggest complaint is unnecessary reputation, lots of “he used stab and stabbed”, or “the chamber was a large chamber”. there was also quite a few places were he seemed to say the same thing in three different sentences just worded slightly different. Or unnecessary details “he thought about picking up hi sword, then he picked up his sword.
Lot of stuff that just made me question if the chapters are even proofread much less edited.
Will definitely get the next book, but hoping the quality improves.