Good story and narration, but the book felt abbridged. There are sudden jumps in time that feel like something was there but was cut on the editing floor. i dont mind an hours worth of stats but when they take up more than 10% of the book you feel a little cheated. could have used about 3 more hours of actual content to be worth the credit. Having said all that the setting the author has created is fantastic and the characters feel alive and interesting. Please for the next book take the time to deliver a finished product. im pretty sure it will be worth it.
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