this story is awesome and I can’t wait to hear the others; however, I do have a few issues that almost killed it for me.
the only issues I have are not about the story as much as it’s execution. The narrator was whining like a child begging for a toy in the beginning but did get his footing rapidly and I almost passed on this when I heard the whining in the audio sample. The other issue is the painfully long-winded way the writer described simple things and the over sharing description of action sequences.
If the story itself wasn’t so compelling I would have ended my listening after barely starting and I am very glad I did not as this is exactly the story I have been wanting to hear. and it is probably the story you want to hear too!