***Spoiler Alert***

1.) If the main character has a familiar that familiar should not be more powerful than the M.C.. This main characters familiar is right out of the box more powefull than he is and can’t be killed. She can kill level 20+ and burn an entire goblin village to the ground being a demon level 6?

2.) The writer introduces Gold coins to the main character which then proclaims that he has never seen gold coins in his life and is in love with them… Yet that main character has killed more than 50 players already and has looted every single one, you Don’t think that after killing 50 players not one of those players is going to have a coin purse on them??

3.) Could totally do without the random X rated porn. it slows down the books otherwise humorous fun pace.