the neg to some might be the sound fx and how fast the mc fell in love with trin but I personally enjoyed the sfx. As for the love story bit, I get it. teenagers especially mentally screwed up ones fall in and out of love on a shift of the breeze so the love story bit isn’t unbelievable to me.
Honestly I wasn’t expecting to like this book and thought it would be a quick return, pleasantly surprised i liked it and cant wait for Omega Zero to get released and I’ll probably buy the other books buy this guy just because I liked this one so much.
I actually like this author’s story better then some of my favorite series because it’s not riddled with sex or crap like that. It handles it tastefully, not ignoring the subject but handling it realistically like normal people would in a conversation, and not making it like the first few Alpha World books or the Wild Wastes series.
The characters are believable and I actually feel like the conversations could be real with the exception of how fast the mc accepts his place in his new life style at first. At the same time I’m very happy it didn’t dwell on that overly much like other series like to do, where you’ll be on book four or eight and the mc will have an existential crisis because of the new world or lifestyle. At first I didn’t get it but after you get to know the mc and his way of thinking it’s more believable.
TL;DR: realistic characters, treats sex like real people would with no detail, over all good book.