I really wanted to love this, but I couldn’t because of the writing. Gaps in the story that should have been persued, characters without depth or development, glossed over technical details, it was all very disconnected. If a character in your story has a name, they should have an introduction, a description, and an explanation of their relationship to the main characters and storyline at the very least. The story idea is awesome & the narration was also very good, but after thirty five hours…it felt like a collection of unremarkable locations, with very flat characters that were just passing acquaintances, which made it difficult to feel invested in the story or the outcome.