Andrew Tell’s performance was great, he brought life to the characters despite the writers inability to do so. The story itself was good, I enjoyed the premise, but there were multiple occasions when especially during interactions between characters or between a character and the environment where the author summed up the conversation or events but should have taken the time to show us the details. in multiple places the author would say a line describing an event or a feeling of the characters and two lines later repeated the exact same line near verbatim. I think a little better editing could have made it flow better. there were characters whom had conversations and actions changed the story who were never named, no insight into them at besides farmer or merchant or mother or father. with that being said I did enjoy the story. I thought it had good potential and would like to read more about the protagonists further adventures. hopefully the author will hone his craft a little more and not leave me groaning with phrasing or repetition mistakes.