This was a very good story with a Lit RPG with a different take on following a monster.
There are several uncomfortably graphic oversexualized scenes the feel rather forced into the story. normally that is the kind of thing that wouldn’t bother me but it just feels SO inserted in there that it really feel like the Author had a bet to see what the editor would pull him back on and the editor wasn’t going to play chicken with the author.
It is gratuitous to the point where the author is just laughing at the reader/listener having just made them endure. As if he is daring you to continue reading. I don’t like getting negged if you can call it that.
but with the exception of the previous stated scenes it is a great story and Jeff hays did a killer job also.