Overall pretty good story. Only issues I had is the author keeps forgetting things he already brought into the story. It wouldn’t be that big of an issue but its all through the book with all sorts of thing. Needless to say the author need to be a lot more attentive to details. He’s doing great with the big things but these little mistakes all over the place mount up. Really need some good proof readers or something to clean up his writing before he releases it. Even with that said its still a great story and I will be getting the next book. I just hope the author learns to clean up his work better because I love the story and the way he writes it just those little mistakes pile up after awhile.

Oh ya, And sound effects and music should never over power the dialog. You should always be able to hear what is said clearly.