The storyline is interesting as are the characters; albeit some could be better developed. I wish for more strategy and world building and less combat. With the forge such a mystery, the authors could have built more intrigue.

Just think about Rendezvous with Rama. No battles, alien architecture, and total suspense. I’m not saying the messenger series should have no battles just fewer. And more focus on some of the other characters and strategies to fight the golden.

And as always, I am happy to fall asleep listening to Jeffrey Kafka.