Good performance horrendous story.

It reads like it’s this authors first book.

lots of telling you about actions instead of showing you. Strange chapters where he starts at the end. Very flat and boring characters. I got through about 2 hours of this book. I wish it was better the narrator is fantastic but the writing needs a lot of improvement. I couldn’t finish it. It’s not like Randi Darren where it’s basically smut with a good story this is just smut.