this series would be alot better if all the modern colloquialisms were removed. Things like “on fleek”, “yolo”, and all the transgender dwarf crap could go. No self-respecting author should ever use terms like “fleek” or “yolo”, things that have no business in the English language do not belong in books. and as for the tranny dwarf? read your audience, a bunch of straight males don’t want to hear about that crap. other than that, good books, author is very visual and descriptive, the story is fun, it just needs fixed.