Good, a bit liniar.

the story was decent, could have used a few side plots but was interesting enough. Miller gets a little annoying at times going a little too far. But the main character evolve more than I expected after the first few chapters. I was starting to get turned off with all of the religion stuff but so far it’s not too bad at all. I wish combat was a little more descriptive, and the way the game system is designed the ridiculous intelligence is a bit much but not nearly as unbalanced as a lot of other litrpg stories.

as for the narrator’s, decent job. But seriously stop doing voices of people while they’re eating. it is utterly disgusting and doesn’t add anything except a gross factor that is completely unnecessary. And the sniffs sigh thing when someone is crying is a little redundant.