and then I said,
and then she said,
and then we said,
but then Frank said….
I could continue, but that would be an “I said”.
Tho he “said”… followed by she said””…
if on3 mor3 question is said”” I’ll lose my shit.
there are over 1000 ways to describe a question, answer, thought, idea, etc …. etc…. and yet it is all “said”?
Bro, get a new editor. Your job is to tell the story, and their job is to clean it up. Questions, aren’t said… they are asked. If I took out one word of this story (that word being “said”) , I could cut out almost a full hour…. with one word. (If I’m being honest, probably more)
This is a great story, but it lacks a good editor.
That being SAID,
your editor sux.
“said” Kiowa.
-That’s what Kiowa “said”….
said Kiowa, “That guy sucks.”
“He sucks?” She said…
“Yes, his editor sucks!”, He said.