It was good mostly through until the end. We learn of the motivations of one of the antagonists is that she hates dungeons and that it had killed someone close to them. They go for revenge on the dungeon that killed their loved one. Yet even when a resolution comes up that should of destroyed her plans for revenge, she gets all “I’m angry and hateful no matter what” and decides to keep trying to kill everyone. This is not how people act. Why is she even motivated to keep being the enemy at that point. It’s irritating and unrealistic and forceful just to add drama and conflict. Also “nictitating membrane” is used every single time teara describes a dinosaur. You will notice every single time.