Its a reasonable fun and simple story, but the MC grows ridiculously fast and powerful in very short amounts of time. I would have preferred some more challenges, slower growth, time for something besides ‘He then ate himself out of all his problems.’ or at the very least, not exponential growth after each scene. In the course of 8 hrs (less really because of the set up and other character’s perspective chapters) he goes from being a garden snake to becoming nothing short of a god.
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